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3. The Detonation (500–700 words)
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Expand on the moment the words are spoken.
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Include dialogue snippets to make the scene alive.
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Consider describing metaphors for the words “detonating” (e.g., shattering silence, igniting tempers).
4. Consequences and Fallout (600–800 words)
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Show characters’ inner thoughts, doubts, and strategies.
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Introduce tension between personal morals vs. political ambitions.
5. Reflection and Broader Implications (400–600 words)
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Could discuss power of language, accountability, or historical precedents.
6. Conclusion (200–300 words)
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End with a thought-provoking line or a quiet observation that lingers, e.g., “The echoes of that sentence would haunt the Senate long after the marble halls had emptied.”
Writing Tips
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Show, don’t just tell: Instead of saying “everyone was shocked,” describe their reactions, gestures, murmurs, or facial expressions.
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Pace your drama: Build tension slowly before the detonation, then let it unravel afterward.
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Historical or political references: Realistic or fictional, they make the story richer.
If you want, I can draft the first 500–600 words of this piece with strong imagery and political tension based on your starting sentence, so you have a foundation to build the rest.